Gaia Strike spells

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Name:Gaia strike:Earth spine
Element:Earth
Description:User controls the earth, to make Sharp spine like rocks come out of the ground and stab opponent, also then allows Gaia strike:Cactus bomb to be used as a chain reaction.Power of the magic differ from areas, in muddy or sandy areas it is very weak, in an area with good strong solid ground, or in a rocky area, it is very strong.
Range:30 meters
Post Duration:1 post
Cooldown:4post
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Name:Gaia strike:Cactus Bomb
Element:Earth
Description:After Gaia Strike:Earth Spine is used, the earth spines start to swell up and more smaller spines come out of it(looks like a cactus) then it explodes shooting the smaller spines in all directions.Power of the magic differ from areas, in muddy or sandy areas it is very weak, in an area with good strong solid ground, or in a rocky area, it is very strong. This is a chain reaction to Gaia strike:Earth spine and cannot be used without Gaia strike:Earth spine being used before it.
Range:40 meters
Post Duration:1post
Cooldown:5post
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Name:Gaia Strike:Earth armour
Element:Earth
Description:The user controls the earth around them to form an armour out of the earth around them, its power differs from area to area.Muddy area results in softer armor and weaker attacks, but lighter, a rocky area would result in a more hard, and sharper, but heavier,armor, a sandy area results in an armor that is more easily broken, but lighter, an area with lots of pebbles results in a smoother, harder armor that is heavier, an in area with boulders results in a extremely hard, extremely powerful armor that is extremely heavy. During duration any change in the landscape, like flooding or eruption, results in the armor changing too.
Range:*attached
Post Duration:6 post
Cooldown:6 post
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Posts : 112 Jewel : 0 Join date : 2011-01-26

So are earth strike and cactus bomb suppose to be a chain reaction magic? If so then it's best if you mention that inside the descriptions. You need to be more descriptive with the armor, try to say how much it can defend from attacks and how weaker or stronger it gets when in different places. I want you to be more specific with your spells if you don't mind, at least give them a 3-4 line description at minimum. Remember that non-canon magic shouldn't be described in just a line or two.

Posts : 15 Jewel : 0 Join date : 2011-08-11

Got it

Posts : 112 Jewel : 0 Join date : 2011-01-26

for your first 2 spells, aren't they sort of like instant attacks? Unless you change the duration to 1 post or explain how it last from 4-2 posts.

Posts : 15 Jewel : 0 Join date : 2011-08-11

sorry i didnt even relize that(im not exactly the sharpest tool in the shed)

Posts : 112 Jewel : 0 Join date : 2011-01-26

Alright, this is approved for now but won't be moved into approval until your character is approved. You never know when you might want to change your magic.

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character approved

Admin Posts : 64 Jewel : 0 Join date : 2011-01-26

Moved to the Approved Section.

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